Have i told u?

[Sabor]

Have i told u?
That i love u like no other
Have i told u
That i miss u and its a big bother
Have i told u how it feels
its my inside and my inside reels
Have i told u how it aches
How it shakes, how it flakes, how much time it takes
How about how it withers day upon useless day
How my feathers are turning grey, how i forgot how to play
How it soothes, how it smoothes
How it pains, how it rains
How this soul, in your eyes remains
Captured, enslaved, lost, depraved
Haunted, bewildered, shackled and maimed
Have i told u about my days, my nights, joys and frights
How its all dark, lonely, nulled of any lights
Have i mentioned that i get weak
So weak, i no longer care to speak
So i write, i fight to fend off my freak
Loosing the inner battle time and time again
Loose many, win some, yet still sad to remain
Stronger than i thought, even stronger than i proclaim
Have i told u how i wish i had no strength left
how i wish to be broken, be beaten, of all feelings bereft
For as strong as i am i can find no reprieve
Haa! for what good does it do when u dont believe
Mercy is all i can ask for and what my pride can never achieve..

[Pacion]

:doh: You told me this last night! Are you in lurve or something, that you don't remember? :tongue: :lol:


I shall repeat again, it is beautiful :wink:

[Sabor]

i did? :shock: .. oh my.. i guess i mistook u for someone else then! :wink: .. since i always have my eyes closed in these situations .. i'm sure u understand :mrgreen:

Thanx.. altho i dont remeber the first time :tongue:

[megaproto]

OMg you are damn good.............................. gee you are now one of my hero 8) so poetic yet something allright good on yaah!

[Sagitta]

Even the avatar reflects the written word. :)

[Pacion]

i guess i mistook u for someone else then! :wink: ..

:evil: Yes, I see there is some character called Humor who is fighting for your affections :tongue: :lol:

[Pacion]

Sigh!

I was searching to see if a possible thread had been done before, and came across this. I just had to resurrect it. :D

[cocodrilo]

Either this guy is in love bigtime, or he is on the verge of confessing to a great murder.

[Pacion]

ROTFL!!! :lol: :lol: :lol:

[Rosa]

Have i told u?
That i love u like no other
Have i told u
That i miss u and its a big bother
Have i told u how it feels
its my inside and my inside reels
Have i told u how it aches
How it shakes, how it flakes, how much time it takes
How about how it withers day upon useless day
How my feathers are turning grey, how i forgot how to play
How it soothes, how it smoothes
How it pains, how it rains
How this soul, in your eyes remains
Captured, enslaved, lost, depraved
Haunted, bewildered, shackled and maimed
Have i told u about my days, my nights, joys and frights
How its all dark, lonely, nulled of any lights
Have i mentioned that i get weak
So weak, i no longer care to speak
So i write, i fight to fend off my freak
Loosing the inner battle time and time again
Loose many, win some, yet still sad to remain
Stronger than i thought, even stronger than i proclaim
Have i told u how i wish i had no strength left
how i wish to be broken, be beaten, of all feelings bereft
For as strong as i am i can find no reprieve
Haa! for what good does it do when u dont believe
Mercy is all i can ask for and what my pride can never achieve..

Well, Sabor, we've all had our hearts broken at least once.... if you want to talk to us, we're right here.

Rosa :)

[Pacion]

Well, Sabor, we've all had our hearts broken at least once.... if you want to talk to us, we're right here.

Rosa :)

:raisebro: Sabor, notice Rosa wrote "talk". She did not say "flirt" :P :wink: :lol:

Personally, I think Sabor is fine, no pun intended :wink: He is just a bit of a poet. :D