Intoxicated (wannabe dance-poetry)

Lockstep

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Utter and complete boredom in my economics class allowed my mind to wander back to last night's dancing with my "muse"/dancefloor crush/usual practice partner, and got me to produce this little thingy thing:

Intoxicated

This dance with you
That spreads its warmth
And tingles my mind
Is like a glass
Of fine rosé
Which makes me thirst
With every sip
Until I'm left
Alone to savour
This blissful intoxication

any poets or wannabe-poets like be with some useful comment, such as on the cheesiness of my wine analogy? :) oh well, beats falling asleep during the class ;)

reminds me we used to have this yearly 'classroom artwork' exposition at my college,...wonder what happened to it. some of those boredom-pieces were pretty impressive
 

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